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Insomnia 1

Insomnia 1

Photography Photography \ Architecture | 03/14/08 @860 | yvy | Comments critiques (20) | Views views (318)


Insomnia 1
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time for a bit of greyness. Kozle, Poland, fog, canon 350d, lensbaby 3G.

edit: cloned out the black square sign, fixed the gradient
 
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Avatar ThruMyEyez

 03/14/08 @877

I like having only the one main element, the lamp in focus. At a quick glance this seems a simple photo but the many elements all fit together very well. The use of DOF is really good.
 
Avatar Jafus

 03/14/08 @946

GR8 mmod!!
Agree with master gary!!
i would add more contrast;)
 
Avatar moserArtist

 03/15/08 @260

Red X for me, sorry!
 
Avatar purplerose

 03/15/08 @333

Nice mood.

Highlights could be slightly brighter without taking away from the mood.

The composition could be improved. Right now the shape hat's "leaving" the photo on the right edge throws off the balance. It should be incorporated better or the composition should focus on a better angle of the main lamp post.
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 03/15/08 @358

I think this photo has great potential but would need more refined post-processing. It's a bit too dingy and dirty. The whites should be brighter. The concentric circles must go, black specks should be cloned, and the bottom right is a large area which lacks any detail or an interesting element. That being said, I do enjoy the Downtown English mood of the photo. I find myself searching for Jack the Ripper.
 
Avatar yvy

 03/15/08 @532

thx for crits. i agree a bit with a composition but i couldn't take another angle since i was standing on a bridge-there was no way up or down. i disagree about whiter whites tho. it wasn't bright there and the fog added to it, it's meant to be extremely dark photo.
 
Avatar Gods-Mistake

 03/15/08 @781

At first I didn't think it was real.
I like it through and through.
 
Avatar Almost-Human

 03/15/08 @799

Good image, dont like the banding in the sky.
And I would digitally light the lamp !
 
Avatar twistoflime

 03/15/08 @885

Eery. Make me think of Jack the Ripper.
 
Avatar Vasco

 03/16/08 @036

Again, as I have been doing lately, I agree with MsM.
 
Avatar workster

 03/16/08 @132

I like this a lot. Agree with MsMichelleLynn that some more processing would help. I'd lose the square sign near the lamp.
Don
 
Avatar cupcake

 03/16/08 @816

Nice idea,
I agree with AH,
That sky needs to be fixed.
 
Avatar miraluz06

 03/16/08 @861

I like the dark, foggy treatment. It's a shame about that little square sign next to the lamp - might want to consider cloning it out.
 
Avatar yvy

 03/17/08 @621

thanks, i was wondering about that sign. i might indeed clone it out. thanks everybody.
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 03/19/08 @026

I like it a lot. Great mood.
 
Avatar mamoun

 03/20/08 @813

very good! :)
 
Avatar LiddleLarsen

 03/23/08 @001

Nice but not sure about the dark in the corners??

 
Avatar adiart

 03/23/08 @870

Great image with nice Depth of Field and focus,

Don't have much to say as everything has already been said
 
Avatar yvy

 03/28/08 @646

i like vignetes, sorry :p
 
pgarnet05

 04/23/08 @908

amazingly eerie, wonderfully set mood +7/7
 
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